Tuesday, February 10, 2009

Incomplete thoughts.

Often in life we come to crossroads such
That each road, for us, holds so much
The question seems simple so to see
Only one cannot decide what the answer should be.
.........

Had started this poem some time back. As it shows I was in a state of dilemma. Lost the chain of thougth and could never pick up the strain so I leave it to the readers to add their own to these four lines. Any and all contribution will be humbly and gladly accepted.

2 comments:

Naqeeba said...

Often in life we come to crossroads such
That each road, for us, holds so much
The question seems simple so to see
Only one cannot decide what the answer should be.
.........
we try to move up and down,
breaking our heads in the lonely town.
then comes a ray in dark,
showering destiny and hopes apart,.
and then you step a foot ahead,
hence the way you were looking ahead.

Unknown said...

In life we often feel fear
In life we often shed a tear
In life we usually cry
In life some of us witness someone die
In life we feel pain
In life there are things that happen to us that we cannot explain
In life we get hurt
In life some of us get treaten as if we are no better than dirt
Life is not always great for some
So for the rest pay attention to who you become
For you may be the one causeing someone's life to be like this
When in fact you could possibly make someone's life a bliss
So what do you want to be
When people look at you, what do you want them to see?
Help others and trust me the reward is great
Because with your help you can save people from this fate

just because...

Often in life we come to crossroads such
That each road, for us, holds so much
The question seems simple so to see
Only one cannot decide what the answer should be